All Comments on 'MoanLisé vs. The World'

Quite inventive. I like the idea of mixing a prose poem with song lyrics.

Excellent attention to detail with the prose, details like

'Coordinates link, GPS greenscreens watching a red dot draw close'

help build a vivid picture for the reader. Am a little confused by the title, though. I'm assuming that 'MoanLisé' is the name of the woman being chased, but it sounds a little odd

(since the character isn't that much like the Mona Lisa, which it presumably refers to)

mentioned in today's new poem reviews

I've been reading your poetry on the New Poem's page and on the PF&D forum. I enjoy it; your poetry is fresh with interesting phrasing and good imagery, that and you have kick-ass titles.

and what can i add? its a great piece 2d. keep 'em coming.

curt