All Comments on 'MoanLisé vs. The World'

and what can i add? its a great piece 2d. keep 'em coming.

curt

I've been reading your poetry on the New Poem's page and on the PF&D forum. I enjoy it; your poetry is fresh with interesting phrasing and good imagery, that and you have kick-ass titles.

mentioned in today's new poem reviews

Quite inventive. I like the idea of mixing a prose poem with song lyrics.

Excellent attention to detail with the prose, details like

'Coordinates link, GPS greenscreens watching a red dot draw close'

help build a vivid picture for the reader. Am a little confused by the title, though. I'm assuming that 'MoanLisé' is the name of the woman being chased, but it sounds a little odd

(since the character isn't that much like the Mona Lisa, which it presumably refers to)