by laelia
how true.
I love this
a wonderful look at intimacy and voyeurism
: )
and done in your wonderful minimalist style
thank you, once again
I like the poem and your style.
I might change "clothes" to "cloak" in the final line if it were my work.
"Cloak" has additional connotations with "viewing".
....an image and a mood with so few words. Great stuff.