All Comments on 'modelling'

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TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Mmmmmmmm

how true.

I love this

a wonderful look at intimacy and voyeurism

: )

and done in your wonderful minimalist style

thank you, once again

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
modelling

I like the poem and your style.

I might change "clothes" to "cloak" in the final line if it were my work.

"Cloak" has additional connotations with "viewing".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Oh how you catch....

....an image and a mood with so few words. Great stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Clean

and simple... nothing weighs this beauty down :)

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