All Comments on 'Moment'

This poem was mentioned in Tuesday's New Poems Reviews.

Thanks for the read!

but I have to say this. Is <B>depthness</B> even a word? <B>Depth</B> would have sufficed. And you really need some punctuation. I am a huge fan of leave a comma out, when in doubt, but an apostrophe in Lets is so necessary.

I bet you could write this out and play with it a little bit and come up with a really good poem, but the rhyme is tedious in some places and good in others.

I hope you stick around and keep submitting, pop over to the poetry forum. It can be a grand learning experience if that is what you want, or you can just come to play which is about all that goes on anymore...

keep up the writing, I enjoyed reading you for the first time.

NJ