All Comments on 'monkey trap'

did you switch "person" in your poem? It started out fine, then went from " the monkey" to take "me away". I think that should be made clear in your work, if it is a generic, anon monkey of if it is you all along......I like your idea, you have a good start but the change up confused me along with the end,. What does beauty and the beast have to do with your monkey? just curious....

keep writing!!

...George rides again. Look but don't touch? I like your thinking.

Tess