by lobomao
...George rides again. Look but don't touch? I like your thinking.
Tess
did you switch "person" in your poem? It started out fine, then went from " the monkey" to take "me away". I think that should be made clear in your work, if it is a generic, anon monkey of if it is you all along......I like your idea, you have a good start but the change up confused me along with the end,. What does beauty and the beast have to do with your monkey? just curious....
keep writing!!