All Comments on 'Morbid Dance'

Damn girl!

Glad you're past

that back then period

Wowza.

Glad to see your feeling

better now. Think we have all

been in that spot in time.

Where we wish ... for change.

Then something, someone

comes into our lives.

Whether a friend or lover.

Brings the sun back out,

and happiness reigns supreme ~

Nice dark poem here.

Very * Morbid * ... Moody piece.

Huggs to you my friend ~

" I don't have a decent chance. I hate this morbid dance." How very cool, paints clear images of that all too familiar feeling of dread we feel ~ sometimes on a very regular basis. Wonderful, sound poem. Great use of simple terms. Keep writing!