All Comments on 'Mostly'

The first three stanzas were so good! This poem has promise! Keep going in the direction you started and get away from all that "I'm a tiger in bed" stuff. And the last stanza... no, no, no. I'm not trying to be rude, RF. I'm just a pissed off reader who was offered something good and I want more but I want what you offered in the beginning. Oh, and the lemon stanza isn't bad.

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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I mostly, not true, almost totally loved it. I could have been totally satisfied without the explication at the last stanza. "I am who I am" said God, and for the purpose of the poem you are its creator. But mostly, I found it (excuse the cliche) - inpiring!

You're also a very sensual woman with a soul that desires to give of herself in ways that any man would (should) cherish. RF has a lusty playful side that she should allow to come out and play more often. Her words speak of depth, emotion, a serious side, as well as a playful one.

I hope to see more and more of the playful. Its worth the trip.

this is my favorite of all your writes thus

far.,You let your guard down for a moment,

and let us see you for who you are, and WOW..

she is beautiful, you are beautiful,

with such wonderful usage of word and flow..

who could not be blown away by this..in this

search of soul lost/found piece.

*****mY fav*****

much love,

sGp