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by Peaceful_Chaos

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EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Amusing

gave me a little laugh.

Think the comma in line 8 isn't needed.

vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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Coolio, an ode to your bed. I am with you. I loved it. It made me smile. I agree about the comma too.

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