by BeyondtheVeil
Thanks for sharing..... A delicious journey no matter what the form or format...
It's damn good writing and a lovely sensual read.
Of course, it is prose, and there is really no "option" for prose, so it went under poetry, as it is not story with a substantial plot. While, of course, it is not refined, by any means, I wonder to which "earlier" pieces you are referring, exactly, seeing as I have only submitted one preceding this. I have been writing for years, but I am very new to writing erotic prose/poetry, so I'm open to constructive criticism. It's more about the art of it, for me, and the presentation than bringing to, ahem, culmination. I have no desire to write full-blown pieces.
Truth be told, this was a private correspondence... a rather steamy exchange, in any event.
You appear to have lost the refinement and precision of your earlier pieces and seem to have overextended yourself. S.O.