by Liar
Loved it, particularly the last line that conveys the sense of wonder so perfectly.
Your words made me think of someone I have wanted for a long time and there has never been enough time. Your words made me smile and my heart ache, but in a wonderful way. Your poem was quite lovely.
This poem gives the reader the barest sketch and allows a vivid picture to appear. Well worth more than 5.
Usually intermittent rhyming doesn't work and trips up the word flow.
Here you have managed to avoid the tongue stumbles with an added soupcon of alliteration.
I enjoy your tense writing but would prefer more than just a mere taste.
is no feeling like that " connection' and you've captured it to a "T"
thank you