All Comments on 'Needs'

by Town_Doorknob

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sexual Release...

A violent taking of one another in the cruelest way imaginable. Well Crafted! Stark and merciless!

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionover 17 years ago
ouch!

I enjoyed the poem, however I would not enjoy the biting!

Velvet_PollyVelvet_Pollyover 17 years ago
disregarding content

the short lines are like stutters. Nothing new here.

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