All Comments on 'New Day'

ideas..and I like this ending:

~Dreams of an end

Becomes reality of beginnings

With each new day ~

That's a nice little twist there.

Keep reading and writing you'll find your style

: )

excellent description

emotional ... no wait ... passionate

very enchanting and ... elisive?

thanks for the read~

I liked the inveitable condratictions made in this. Every word gave a sense of wonderment and truth.