All Comments on 'Night Of Remembrance Ch.1'

A promising start to another prose series, leaving the poor reader dangling in suspense.

I am curious, how does an airplane sleep? ( I assume you meant that most of the people on tha airplane, but assumptions are usually a mistake) and the lack of punctuation is not good, and I rarely say that about a poem, but you need some punctuation in this poem.

I LOVE the story you are telling though, and the haphazard way this was put together almost caused me to backspace. I am gad I didn't do that.

thanks for a very intriguing read

NJ