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by vqfarrold

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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Line one second stanza you've put 'between' twice

vqfarroldvqfarroldabout 13 years agoAuthor
Whoops

Thanks for picking that up, UYS. I'd better fix it before before you slap the handcuffs on me.

raconteuseraconteuseover 12 years ago
Beautiful

I found this sensuous poem deeply arousing. You created a lyrical atmosphere that merges wonderfully with the lushness of the whole. You write with power and confidence. Thank you

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I write for my own pleasure and post my writing here in the hope that others may find some enjoyment in it too (thanks, Literotica, for providing that opportunity). Some of it springs from my fantasies, some from experience, some from suggestions of others. I try to be origi...