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by Alicemoon

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LipSurfaceLipSurfaceover 3 years ago
lovely, poignant and sexy

lovely, poignant and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Truth

Wow 🤩

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story rhyme

Full of heat, description and feelings, 👏🏼👏🏼

pranaykathapranaykathaover 3 years ago

Nice one! Liked the rhyme, choice of words, and flow of the poem. The bathroom mirror as the stage and the nudies waiting in the phone like skeletons hid in the closets? Superb!

AlicemoonAlicemoonover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for your kind words!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

FRUSTRATIONS ARE A PART OF THE JOURNEY-WELL DONE

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 3 years ago
**

Made me smile and has much more than the usual dirty ditty. Mentioned in Poetry Recommendations..

unpublaauthorunpublaauthorover 3 years ago
This was absolutely beautiful...

This poem artfully reveals the emotions behind this "salacious" act. I really appreciate the twist at the end, bittersweet, yet completely honest.

RichardWWRichardWWover 3 years ago

Love the rythmn of this poem, and the confessional theme!

joguyjoguyover 3 years ago
sweet and sexy

Hot and heartbreaking

Wark2002Wark2002over 3 years ago

Even with the dark edges, a lot of fun getting there. I am reminded a little of W. H. Davies in your word usage.

Mulerider69Mulerider69over 3 years ago
Erotic poem

Very erotic but sad at the end. You are not alone in this world. We are listening and care.

OldnotDead71OldnotDead71almost 3 years ago
Excellent poetic structure

You have as much a way with words as with conte' crayon and chalk/pastels. You may be an erotic renaissance woman! lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Broke my heart — truly hope you find the right goers to be moonlit and warmed by that party that is you sweetheart — cheers sister

Wombat457Wombat457almost 3 years ago

Nice work. Writing in rhymes does my head in. Yours is ok.

SlavehuntrSlavehuntralmost 2 years ago

Alone? Nevah...

An entire community --

bound in lifestyle unity --

surrounds ya.

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 2 years ago

Dear Alice,

I hope that is not you in these last lines.

Life can be a joy, but also

Life can be so cruel.

If you do ever feel so depressed take a trip to a park, take in the joy of nature of children laughing.

I challenge any sadness to remain in such surroundings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You capture the angst of youth, of isolation, of scared to be different, scared to be you. And everyone of us will recognize those beings.

Sail on sweet Alice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You speak openly from the heart ,and are unafraid to expose your inner most longings. We all deserve to be truly loved and appreciated. Sooner. Or later. "IT " happens

davebccanadadavebccanadaover 1 year ago

Not my usual kink but I was taken by your candor and style. Thank you for sharing with us.

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Alice Albert-Moon Alice Albert-Moon is an aspiring illustrator, emerging essayist, and enthusiastic writer of erotic fiction. Her small but growing portfolio of work can be found and followed both here and on Quora.com. So please check them out! Please also feel free to offer...