by Alicemoon
Nice one! Liked the rhyme, choice of words, and flow of the poem. The bathroom mirror as the stage and the nudies waiting in the phone like skeletons hid in the closets? Superb!
Made me smile and has much more than the usual dirty ditty. Mentioned in Poetry Recommendations..
This poem artfully reveals the emotions behind this "salacious" act. I really appreciate the twist at the end, bittersweet, yet completely honest.
Even with the dark edges, a lot of fun getting there. I am reminded a little of W. H. Davies in your word usage.
Very erotic but sad at the end. You are not alone in this world. We are listening and care.
You have as much a way with words as with conte' crayon and chalk/pastels. You may be an erotic renaissance woman! lol
Broke my heart — truly hope you find the right goers to be moonlit and warmed by that party that is you sweetheart — cheers sister
Alone? Nevah...
An entire community --
bound in lifestyle unity --
surrounds ya.
Dear Alice,
I hope that is not you in these last lines.
Life can be a joy, but also
Life can be so cruel.
If you do ever feel so depressed take a trip to a park, take in the joy of nature of children laughing.
I challenge any sadness to remain in such surroundings.
You capture the angst of youth, of isolation, of scared to be different, scared to be you. And everyone of us will recognize those beings.
Sail on sweet Alice.
You speak openly from the heart ,and are unafraid to expose your inner most longings. We all deserve to be truly loved and appreciated. Sooner. Or later. "IT " happens
Not my usual kink but I was taken by your candor and style. Thank you for sharing with us.