All Comments on 'O Glory!'

shear poetry that will make the hairs on your neck stand on in <grin nice write

Last one of yours I look at today.

You've gone with single spacing on this, unlike your other submissions. Suggest try breaking it into perhaps 3 strophes. And this one could have used that spellchecker - dungeon / tortured caught my eye straight off (and is it vain or vein?).

Other than the mechanics, pretty good and a darker conceptual mood.