All Comments on 'Oblivion'

Your formatting didn't do your poem justice. Consider removing the extra line breaks since many people don't like to scroll after reading a mere 20 words on the page. If you make us do all that work ;) you'd better have a really good poem to scroll through, yours is alright but is in real danger of losing your reader after the first stanza. Submit an edit with the line breaks repaired and I'm sure folks will at least read more than the first few lines.