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some great lines in your poem, nice poetry, Art~

You've got to get your work published! You're a fabulous poet!

Relationships really do have a way of taking on universal dimensions and slipping further through time and space.

I find your writing provocative and inviting. your subject matter always appeals to me.

~Syn

a celestial beauty of a poem for a relationship failed. Only you, Savannah could pull that one off and make it sound so bitter sweet exquisite! I loved the metaphors you penned for this piece - I'm still in the heavens from them! <smile>

Vixxx

in right from the start. my favorite stanza:

Even though I'll always love you

I'll move on to another galaxy

Where stars don't burn out before their time

Blighting the ever perfect celestial skies

******

very nice savannah!!......don