All Comments on 'Ode to James: Take Me Tonight'

Loved it - this was enough to make me want to change my name to James, keep them cumming.

At last - another submission from the "Lady" of my dreams. I loved it. More, please, and soon.

Mylady. I can think of no finer tribute than to have such an erotic poem written just for me. I'll email you privately soon. Until then - remember my undying love for you and your soft beautiful body. James

u know who this is!!! let the games begin ;)

One element of good poetry to me is the ability to paint a vivid picture with the fewest words possible. If, as the old maxim goes, a picture is worth a thousand words, than well crafted verse is worth a thousand pictures.

Each verse expresses a writer's desire to her lover. Untamed lust is in the foreground in this scene of fantasy, but little objects here and there contrast against the passion and betray a deeper longing.

She wants to have sex, but she craves the teasing of foreplay first.

She may be consumed by desire, but it's a desire that is for a man who can give her the loving so meaningful and powerful that it purges her memories of past paramours. Sex is more than a union, it is a rite of cleansing.

She wants to be fingered, but she's is sentimental.

She wants to be penetrated deeply by her man, but she also wants discretion and intimacy.

To me, that is what makes this poem so beautiful.

Climactic build-up that mirrored the encounter itself. And a coarsening of language toward the end that emphasises the excitement of the liaison.

A triumph!

Breathtaking Clarissa! Your words stir my imagination and my passions. The combination of your lust and overflowing beauty set me on fire.

As always Clarissa manages not only to portray torrid sexuality, but with a bit of whimsy. I always enjoy her writings.

this author is hot stuff, she knows who is this

Clarissa - your words just flow in the same way as your juices...could we perhaps call it "Take the Lamb (with lashings of mint sauce) to the slaughter!!

Wonderful.....James xx