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I would pose for you if you could promise I would turn as lovely as this poem :)

Let's just say you are smooth, loved it.

I like your internal rhyme in the third stanza. The last stanza is fabulous. I believe only a couple of images seem out of place with the rest of the poem: bluebonnets may be a bit too sweet, but not bad. Though, fish-net hosiery seems almost sleazy compared to the rest of your words. Maybe it's just me, but I had trouble leaping out of the field of bluebonnets and into a pair of fish nets. ;)

the addition of the hosiery.

a woman in your favorite hose can conjure all those images that you spoke of.

Really well done

and some great language

Thank you

...makes this a wonderful read. I like the amalgamation of painting with poetry - always do. Lovely, thank you.

I'll peel down my hose and suppose that when my nose is full of rose, then

I'll chant the rosary because I must pay penance for you and the run in my hosiery...

(I'm not even catholic!)

I did some posing this past week for two men very dear to me, and reading this poem recaptured the experience for me. Thank you!

Brightest Blessings,

Lalenya :^)