by hornyzombie
hey, really a great poem... loved it the way feelings are expressed.... and the most important thing i loved is " at least we had, that blood-red moon night...." keep it up... :)
Wow! Loved it all. Great depiction of the intensity of lust and love. Tremendous content pondering of all the things that could be. Making it so graphic just made it better all around. Despite its content, it still doesnt fall under a cliche young love poem. This is really good, congrats!
Like I said, this poem is very powerful, yet filled with cuteness and beauty. The way one can translate this story into mental images speaks greatly of the amazing job you did. The passion, the explicitness, the way you include sex scenes without turning it into an obscene pornographic material is excellent. Bravo, horneyzombie.