All Comments on 'On the Way'

by Curiouswife

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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
and then back....

to feel the innuendos of the bad as it implies. love the movement of the poem with its meta-like presence.......don

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Holding it in....

You go gurl~!!

Sometime ya just have to do what ya gotta do.

Don't hold it in. Let it out... be free....

Loved this lil poem.

Very spirited, and your imagery.. is spot on!!!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Nice one

A very enjoyable read,

I loved the flow of this

and the imagery is

wonderful.

Nice work,

Thanks.

~ J

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