All Comments on 'On Top'

a word wizard you are,

a hot, sexy little number

with an excellent flow

and rhythm.

Great stuff!

Thanks.

~ J

Yum! Nice word choices!

I'd say you captured THAT Kodak moment quite nicely...

Loved the steady pace and wording.

Read like a beautiful incantation that bewitched and beguiled me, lovely rhythm! Well done LJ.

A wonderful image made more powerful by the smooth flow of the words. A sweet little rythm that captures the rythm of a hot, sexy adventure. Wonderful buildup and great use of choice erotic words. Well done.

Great visions with this one!!

Makes me wanna yell....YEEHAW!!!!!!

~Honey

there is some movement going on here........nice job.........don

It makes me hot!

Clever. Pleasing to the ear and inspiringly visual to the imagination.

What a ride.

Loved the flow, twist and turns with every word.

Hot imagery, yet smooth as silk.

Wonderful lil poem here~!!

Now THAT'S a ride!!!

Let me catch my breath and make sure

I didn't make a mess..........

but I am glad I read this one! Great! Loved it and sent a copy to a friend!

Damn good job!

Regards1

Yeah, I think we can combine some images here...LOL...thanks for the big smile Lady J...