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Cleardaynowalmost 10 years agoNice structure, concepts and voice.
Lines like:
"I would have walked a million miles for you
I would have died a thousand deaths"
do not help. Not only have we come across them before, they are near meaningless hyperbole
But I do like
"My love was an epic fail
Once upon a fairy tale"
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