All Comments on 'One Bombs - One's Discouragement'

*snaps* I feel ya, Daddy-O.

Your '1-bombs' poem deserves a 5* rating! Enjoyed the trip down memory lane with JA's psychedelic rock

Ahhhh they hurt and sting a poet's heart. So many times I have a five star rating all the way up and suddenly out of nowhere a one bomb. Takes everything away, and you feel so defeated as a writer. You wonder do I have a hater on this site? Is it really that bad? Why do I put myself in this situation? To be judged when I have such a fear of it? It's frustrating and feels personal sometimes. I always tell myself in the end the right people will find my words. Thank you for writing this one, I think we all can relate. XX

Agree with elizaloo! Great poem

If you're going to crib from Jefferson Airplane's White Rabbit, have the decency to give them credit...

One pill makes you larger

And one pill makes you small

And the ones that mother gives you

Don't do anything at all

Go ask Alice

When she's ten feet tall

White Rabbit, Jefferson Airplane

I can't believe this got one bombed... Oh wait, yes I can. They have no sense of humour and can't laugh at themselves.

I so enjoyed this! Singing along and chuckling at my desk. Spot-on, you are! So clever. 5*