- Erotic Poetry
- One Bombs - One's Discouragement
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One bombs make you splutter
One bombs make you small
And the one’s that Anon give you
Are most aggravating of all
Go ask Simon
When he’s ten feet tall
And if you go chasing feedback
And you know they’re going to call
With their ranting and their venom
Their logic-denying ways
Call EB
Before you fall
When the voices in the forum
Rise up and tell you where to go
And your insight is somewhat clouded
And your confidence mighty low
Go ask Laurel
I think she'll know
When balance and civility
Have fallen off the map
And Anonymous is talking nonsense
And defenders don’t speak up
Remember what the Guru said
Keep your head
Keep your head
Keep your head
- COMMENTS
BlissMaraover 1 year agoI so enjoyed this! Singing along and chuckling at my desk. Spot-on, you are! So clever. 5*
Winter_Fareover 1 year agoI can't believe this got one bombed... Oh wait, yes I can. They have no sense of humour and can't laugh at themselves.
Anonymousover 1 year agoIf you're going to crib from Jefferson Airplane's White Rabbit, have the decency to give them credit...
One pill makes you larger
And one pill makes you small
And the ones that mother gives you
Don't do anything at all
Go ask Alice
When she's ten feet tall
White Rabbit, Jefferson Airplane
Anonymousover 1 year agoAhhhh they hurt and sting a poet's heart. So many times I have a five star rating all the way up and suddenly out of nowhere a one bomb. Takes everything away, and you feel so defeated as a writer. You wonder do I have a hater on this site? Is it really that bad? Why do I put myself in this situation? To be judged when I have such a fear of it? It's frustrating and feels personal sometimes. I always tell myself in the end the right people will find my words. Thank you for writing this one, I think we all can relate. XX
elizalooover 1 year agoYour '1-bombs' poem deserves a 5* rating! Enjoyed the trip down memory lane with JA's psychedelic rock
