All Comments on 'One Snow Day'

by SoundsErotica

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Smoothly...

...written, with fine imagery. Very enjoyable!

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
Very gentle language here...

with some interesting phrasing. I loved the vesuvian peak and then the cooling to the flaccid snow. I think this one is a bit more erotic than non... very good.

jim : )

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