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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
'zactly!

Life in fifteen lines.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Some interesting dialect

but at the end, those big words... Seemed out of place with the rough dialect above. Would like to have seen something rougher... perhaps if you fractured those words into a phonetic spelling...

jim :)

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