All Comments on 'Only'

Liar,

I absolutely adore how you take the 'out there' and make it revelent to the 'right here'. It makes even the white spaces between the words take on significant meaning. As always, brilliant.

I like some of the phrasing and the thoughts that are engendered within this poem, but I do not understand the connection of the title to the body of the work.

You have written with more clarity.

hollow shell/shallow hell damn, I like that. An intricate wordplay here... I had to read it three times but yes, I think I see. You were there, right next to hell, and for no comprehendible reason, you are saved, drawn into sanctuary. Well done.

jim : )