All Comments on 'Orange Crush Dreams'

jazz it up a bit and it will rock, right now its more like a dreamsicle and not a really cool soda

is mentioned in the new poetry reviews

It don't need jaz its an awesome blues note... <hehehe>

excellent poem Du, I loved it.

Orange crush is a dream cycle only not frozen

that would be a melted dream cycle which would be from HOT sex, there fore it's now an orange crush, some just can't get it that hot so they settle for dream cycles <lmao>

I thought your poem was grand Du~