by demure101
Beautifully written - as always.
Further it is, I think, the most intelligent, subtle and perceptive analysis I have seen of what 'original sin' as given in the bible actually means.
Nice also to see a significan variation in the theme for your poignancy.
kinda, sorta and fived
I can hardly wait to get to part where Jesus meets Leper Khan in the desert, forgive me Demure I'm just baiting the other guy - you can delete, but I fived.
Almost makes me want to take a whack at KJV, again - poetry is so inspirational
I did mention I fived this
OK just checking
Unimaginable Environmental Sin !!!??? High-5 ed , Dem !!
You and I both post a poem on a similar topic, on the same day but they could not be possibly be any further apart in style
A fabulous 5 :-)