All Comments on 'Original Sin'

by demure101

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CleardaynowCleardaynowalmost 10 years ago
Beautiful and perceptive

Beautifully written - as always.

Further it is, I think, the most intelligent, subtle and perceptive analysis I have seen of what 'original sin' as given in the bible actually means.

Nice also to see a significan variation in the theme for your poignancy.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
what he said

kinda, sorta and fived

I can hardly wait to get to part where Jesus meets Leper Khan in the desert, forgive me Demure I'm just baiting the other guy - you can delete, but I fived.

Almost makes me want to take a whack at KJV, again - poetry is so inspirational

I did mention I fived this

OK just checking

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years ago
just like great Industrial Progress is always Married to

Unimaginable Environmental Sin !!!??? High-5 ed , Dem !!

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredalmost 10 years ago
Would you Adam and Eve it?

You and I both post a poem on a similar topic, on the same day but they could not be possibly be any further apart in style

A fabulous 5 :-)

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
recommended

in new poems

fwitw

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