All Comments on 'Our Love'

I loved it from the first line to the last, elegantly written and beautifully put!

Nice little poem that flows well and gets the job done.

It could be a little tighter.

It's simple, yet, succeeds in conveying the deepest meaning of one's love for another.

wow a very well written poem

and endearing, very nice~

Although I am really fond of your exotic poetry, this was still great, Jennifer. Now I'm home again I must read your stories and poems over again.

Jennifer C:

I only wish some of the other "poets" wrote like you. Thanks for a very much enjoyed work.

Enjoyed the rhythm; it better evokes the pleasure of being enveloped by love than a harder-edged verse speaking of the exhiliraton of raw passion.