by Jennifer C
Enjoyed the rhythm; it better evokes the pleasure of being enveloped by love than a harder-edged verse speaking of the exhiliraton of raw passion.
Jennifer C:
I only wish some of the other "poets" wrote like you. Thanks for a very much enjoyed work.
Although I am really fond of your exotic poetry, this was still great, Jennifer. Now I'm home again I must read your stories and poems over again.
It's simple, yet, succeeds in conveying the deepest meaning of one's love for another.
Nice little poem that flows well and gets the job done.
It could be a little tighter.
I loved it from the first line to the last, elegantly written and beautifully put!