All Comments on 'Our Love'

by ~Elizabeth~

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hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Imagery

Beautifull poem well woven with strong imagery

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
a song

this flowed well enough to be a song~ nice write (~_*)

PicassosPleasurePicassosPleasure3 months ago

I would describe this poem as "sweet streams of simile." I am a hopeless romantic, and I write poetry best from the emotion of love, even my erotic poetry. So this poem read like something I might write, though nowhere near as well because my poetic style. Thank you, for this sweet ride down that stream of simile.

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I am a lady as well as a slut when required and thrive in both situations. I am soul searching constantly. I am strong, independent, loving, loyal, imaginative, mischievous, sexual as well as sensual, passionate and compassionate person. I'm a free thinker, intelligent, spirit...