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All Comments on 'Our Own Remains Of A Day'
by pelegrino
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Oldbear63about 10 years agoI liked this very much
Easily see the happy couple,melancholy couple having romantic time together.
twelveooneabout 10 years agoOK
I like...
dearly/clearly seem like the weak rhymes, a rewrite to make them less end-stopped
unusual/usual, bad
if this is a song
(My baby, Lent is starting, so, Nistia!(1))
what happens here?
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