All Comments on 'Over My Head'

Well, I'm so happy to see my man submit his work. I surely didn't expect to see your name in the list of new poems. Good for you for getting the guts! :)

The meter is good, but this poem is meant to be read slowly or it could sound a little bumpy in areas.

Through times so good and those of blue

What matters most is I'm with you <--beautiful!!