All Comments on 'Owen's Song: The Consummation'

Nicely done, almost epic sounding, prose piece of a man's seduction. There's one very small detail that jumps out that the best spell check program would probably miss, "she preyed" ought to be, "she prayed."

I love your picturesque style which makes me feel and see the colors and emotions in the poem - as you bring life to the words. Beautiful rendering.

It sounds like - The Maid lost her Virginity -

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"He tasted her fruits, spread her petals, inhaled the scent of her leaves. And with wild joy, she opened her limbs and hungrily welcomed his seed."