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You really drew me in to feel this person's pain. Not knowing IS indeed the worst pain.

Thanks for sharing, Dana

This was so Great~!! I really understand and see it all.. You gave us a very vivid picture to the pain, and love lost I think.. or love gained but not to be. I loved this.. Left me wondering what happened? Thanks for the wonderful poem..

Forgive me, I'm new at leaving comments. First of all, I enjoyed your poem. However, I was surprised that you mixed very formal language ("what hath I wrought?") with very informal language ("but did u ever love me"). Well, think on it, but please keep writing.