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by littlebondagegirl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Work

Succinct with excellent use of metaphor. You have an ear for rhythm and the poem flows well with lines such as 'A flimsy, fragile paperdoll.' and 'An old fashioned type of toy.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good poem

Nice use of an extended metaphor to express something profound about "feminitity" and the feminine mind.

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