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yuiyuiabout 19 years ago
Beautiful images

I love this line, "And dreaming through sunsets." Lovely, M., lovely.

BlackShanglanBlackShanglanabout 17 years ago
Lovely and enjoyable

Beautiful imagery clothing gentle philosophy.

bluebellbluebellalmost 16 years ago
Superman as Clark Kent

It could be tempting to dismiss this poem as light reading, but as is the way with many Maggoty things, it isn't. Except, it is. The soul of brevity delivers again, with dancing particles and stanzas that do more heavy lifting than you might expect. Deft indeed, sir.

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