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Reltnealmost 18 years agoVerbals ?
Why "reminder" instead of "reminding"? It supports your rhyme scheme better.
" . . .
binding
reminder to never
. . . "
Otherwise an interesting read.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoNice word play
It's good to see your work again, 4. Another stellar poem written with a silent melody.
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