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Click hereThe wind howls through my cold world
I sit alone, dreaming of you and sun-filled days
Out of reach
We wait
The loneliness seeps in, overwhelming emptiness
Memories of your smile fill me
Too far to see
Interlude
Longing for understanding, a touch to warm me
You complete me
On the other side
Anticipating
I can feel how you feel. That's what a poem is supposed to do...you got mad talent.
PS: I always have a difficult time to connect to other peoples feelings ...so that says a lot about your talent.
I think your poem is superb.
It captures your thoughts and
feelings, which surely is what
poetry needs to do?
It demonstrates your mood
is perhaps a better way of
putting it.
Thank you.
Your poem is mentioned in the recommendations thread in the Poetry Forum.