All Comments on 'peach'

ignore the thermometer, I don't use it.

as for your poem. Loved it. The use of that long first line is perfectly read outloud. The reiteration of "head back" made me want to do it, and your overall imagery is spot on. I enjoyed the read, thanks.

at first I ws put off by the seemingly lack of structure but once I started reading, I realized that IS a structure, a good one, it flows, like warm peach juice dripping down a chin, :) enjoyed it very much, thanks :)

I didn't think this would be a poem I'd like, but I wrong. I like it very much. Wonderful images.

Read this to yourself aloud - it's a lovely and smooth piece of erotica - a peach smoothie on a hot summer day. I would like MWG to make this an audio. It'd be a melter.

this alot.

Great phrasing and line breaks

and I love the end

Very nice

Thank you