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All Comments on 'Pearls of Death'

by wakingDown

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
True ....

Sad but so true.......

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
THIS COULD BE A PRELUDE TO BIRTH

and on to infinity TK U MLJ LV NV

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

This is really well written IMO. I liked the structure of the lines. The last 2 stanzas were outstanding, although I might have actually left out "cancer" giving the reader the "aha" identifying it by means of deduction.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
nothin more to add

just wanted to second Green mountaineers comment

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