by sophia jane
i've always enjoyed your poetry. you have a strong and clear voice in everything you write.
Went through all 4 of the pendulum verses
again and again til there was but two;
I so hate to call "tie"
so I must choose between an excellent pair
and by a hair I go with ms. sophia over the
strong competition offered by ms. lauren
~ but that's just my personal subjective opinion
I am unfamiliar with the challenge, but I did enjoy the poem. ~Imp
As the image of the pendulum formed in my mind, I can see the full depth of what your wrote. Wow, you are truly gifted. Thanks for posting here.
Paul, AKA QuietlyMakingNoise
...and hands down yours is the best. It is a fantastic read all the way thru and the last 4 lines are ass-kicking beautiful.
I had to read it again, to make sure I wasn't missing anything. Very good, as always!
Good poetry is... poetic, to be obvious, and you've done it. An ordinary clock pendulum has been made beautiful through poetry. It's a great relation that you make, and I especially love when you start to tie it together in the last few lines and we get to see the true meaning of why you're on the topic of a pendulum.
Very graceful, very beautiful!