All Comments on 'Pendulum Swings Awry'

Good poetry is... poetic, to be obvious, and you've done it. An ordinary clock pendulum has been made beautiful through poetry. It's a great relation that you make, and I especially love when you start to tie it together in the last few lines and we get to see the true meaning of why you're on the topic of a pendulum.

Very graceful, very beautiful!

I had to read it again, to make sure I wasn't missing anything. Very good, as always!

...and hands down yours is the best. It is a fantastic read all the way thru and the last 4 lines are ass-kicking beautiful.

As the image of the pendulum formed in my mind, I can see the full depth of what your wrote. Wow, you are truly gifted. Thanks for posting here.

Paul, AKA QuietlyMakingNoise

I am unfamiliar with the challenge, but I did enjoy the poem. ~Imp

Went through all 4 of the pendulum verses

again and again til there was but two;

I so hate to call "tie"

so I must choose between an excellent pair

and by a hair I go with ms. sophia over the

strong competition offered by ms. lauren

~ but that's just my personal subjective opinion

i've always enjoyed your poetry. you have a strong and clear voice in everything you write.