All Comments on 'Perspective'

by bogusbrig

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AngelineAngelinealmost 16 years ago
Your Poem

has been recommended in the New Poems review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 16 years ago
^

Very nice, no more to say.

TzaraTzaraalmost 16 years ago
It's you, or rather, your brain. Gestalt theory.

Excellent little vignette, Mr. B. I think "corrals" is misspelled.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
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Liked the beginning; the theorizing would have been much easier on the eye in a less didactic form.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 16 years ago
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I commented earlier on Class and didn't realize until now that you had other poems posted. This one is more like what I expect to read from you. Very good read.

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