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by silverangel621

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MagnetronMagnetronalmost 10 years ago

I liked it. Works well because it doesn't rhyme when you expect it to.

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years ago
A poem from the

Flower's POV ?! Nice .

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
Nice

I like the POV. It seems both sweet and mildly erotic. I just wish the word crumble were fall. It would have fit better IMO. Still very nice.

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