All Comments on 'Phucancer'

by Bn2f

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnow10 months ago

Unfortunately, there aren't enough expletives in all the languages on this world together to curse this disease, and honestly, it would be a waste of precious time to even spend a millisecond for swearing instead of making living the most important matter.

Thank you dearly for your poem.

SilverVeilSilverVeil10 months ago

I understand your anger. I was diagnosed 2 weeks ago. Angry, depressed, frustrated, terrified... I'm going through them all. My thoughts are with you.

BlissMaraBlissMara10 months ago

Your turns of phrase, so very stark, raw, naked, lasered. A visceral gut-punch; this poem demands re-reading. May you be well.

Bn2fBn2f10 months agoAuthor

I am well. Thanks all for the concerns. They are very much appreciated but I know of no one who has not had to deal with this disease on some level and this was the best draft I wrote that channeled my anger towards it and also could pass as something close to poetry. It is always a positive for this board when BlissMara gives a critique and I am sending lots of love and light to SilverVeil on her diagnosis and to an else suffering through this disease.

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